that is reeally good spudders! the music fits perfectly, bit of BFMV/Apocalyptica. I think the greyscale effect on the shots really adds to the mystery and josh shouting on the phone i just thought was a fantastic bit of dialogue, keeping it mysterious to the audience. The only parts i could criticise are the fight scene (not very realistic) and the black at the end i think is too long. Perhaps fill some of it with another shot. i like the idea of cutting to black though. it seems to symbolise the cutting out of life. I don't know if the character dies though.
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that is reeally good spudders! the music fits perfectly, bit of BFMV/Apocalyptica. I think the greyscale effect on the shots really adds to the mystery and josh shouting on the phone i just thought was a fantastic bit of dialogue, keeping it mysterious to the audience. The only parts i could criticise are the fight scene (not very realistic) and the black at the end i think is too long. Perhaps fill some of it with another shot. i like the idea of cutting to black though. it seems to symbolise the cutting out of life. I don't know if the character dies though.
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